Kia Ora Wairini and Rebekah, Great work I really like your Ladybug Butterfly and everything that it can do. It sounds like it is very helpful to the environment - how it breathes in the bad air and then it blows the air back out but fresh and clean air. Next time you could work on writing a bit more about your bug and maybe put a bit more details in what your bug can do. Your poem is amazing I like how it says "I saw a micro eggs upon a leaf they were insects to my belief." From Summer
I really like the way you have presented your blog post and the amazing colour that you have added to your pictures. I also really like your poem. Maybe next time you could make sure that you pictures are big and easy to read as it is hard for the readers to see your last slide.My favourite part about your blog post is your ladybug butterfly because it has heaps of detail about it. Keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Wairini and Rebekah,
ReplyDeleteGreat work I really like your Ladybug Butterfly and everything that it can do. It sounds like it is very helpful to the environment - how it breathes in the bad air and then it blows the air back out but fresh and clean air. Next time you could work on writing a bit more about your bug and maybe put a bit more details in what your bug can do. Your poem is amazing I like how it says "I saw a micro eggs upon a leaf they were insects to my belief."
From Summer
Kia Ora Wairini,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have presented your blog post and the amazing colour that you have added to your pictures. I also really like your poem. Maybe next time you could make sure that you pictures are big and easy to read as it is hard for the readers to see your last slide.My favourite part about your blog post is your ladybug butterfly because it has heaps of detail about it. Keep up the good work.