In Ruma Tahi we wrote about a moment in time. I found it quite easy because I wrote about a moment in time last year.
A Moment In Time
I was in the rough waves with my sister. I felt like I was being tackled
except it didn’t hurt that much. Every time a big wave came I jumped like I
was a high jumper so I didn’t get smashed. Every time a wave made go up it
felt like a water slide but not as long. I could feel the little bumps in the waves
every time they passed me. The salty water went into my mouth a few times
and when it did my mouth went dry.
except it didn’t hurt that much. Every time a big wave came I jumped like I
was a high jumper so I didn’t get smashed. Every time a wave made go up it
felt like a water slide but not as long. I could feel the little bumps in the waves
every time they passed me. The salty water went into my mouth a few times
and when it did my mouth went dry.
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