My Dinosaur Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.

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Back In Time

I went into a thunderstorm with my trustworthy chopper Missy but then Missy got hit by lightning
TZZZ! Then I got electric shocked. I fell asleep and dreamt that a Tyrannosaurus Rex was chasing me and
tried to eat me whole! When I woke up I saw the most amazing things. I saw Pterodactyls flying above
my head and I saw beautiful rock mountains taller than towers.

I had realised that my journey back in time took me to the most beautiful place I had ever seen.  A long
necked dinosaurs called a Barapasaurus was poking its head through the trees. Eating the emerald
green leaves. The trees started were swaying side to side as if they were dancing. I walked around the
tall rock mountains and as I turn the corner I felt shivers through my spine. I had butterflies
and goosebumps until something came up to me RAAAAWW! A Tyrannosaurus Rex stood in
front of me with flesh hanging out of its mouth. The trees went still and birds flew away then
I realised everything was afraid and so was I.